Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m one of your customer, I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.

I’m sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I’d like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】customer →customers

【2】received →receive

【3】too →so

【4】were →was

【5】missed →missing

【6】poorly →poor

【7】ask前加to

【8】去掉back

【9】Beside →Besides

【10】deal →dealing

【解析】

試題分析：作者網(wǎng)購(gòu)了一套書(shū)，遭遇較差服務(wù)且書(shū)籍缺少，封面破損等情況。作者寫(xiě)信要求賣(mài)家解決問(wèn)題。

【1】customer →customers.考查名詞。此處是one of句型指“…之一”，其中名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。故customer →customers.

【2】received →receive.考查動(dòng)詞形式。句中有助動(dòng)詞didn’t后面要用動(dòng)詞原形，故received →receive.

【3】too →so.考查固定句型。句中包含so…that句型，表示“如此…以至于”。故too →so.

【4】were →was.考查主謂一致。主語(yǔ)是the cover of one book指書(shū)的封皮，是單數(shù)。動(dòng)詞與之一致也用單數(shù)，故were →was.

【5】missed →missing.考查形容詞。missed“感到思念的”；missing“丟失的”。此處指一本書(shū)丟了，missing做賓補(bǔ)。故missed →missing.

【6】poorly →poor.考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞service用形容詞，指“差的服務(wù)”，故poorly →poor.

【7】ask前加to.考查不定式。此處是不定式做定語(yǔ)，指要求解決問(wèn)題的權(quán)利，故ask前加to.

【8】去掉back.考查詞意。句中return指“歸還”，后面加back與之重復(fù)，故去掉back.

【9】Beside →Besides.考查副詞。Beside “在…旁邊”表示方位；Besides“此外”表示遞進(jìn)，此處表示遞進(jìn)，故Beside →Besides.

【10】deal →dealing.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。此處指你處理問(wèn)題的進(jìn)程，用于your后面，是動(dòng)名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，故deal →dealing.