Question

假如你是高中生李華，請根據(jù)以下要點，以日記的形式，敘述你在11月15日（周六）參加在鄉(xiāng)下橘子采摘節(jié)（Orange-picking Festival）的活動情況。
你到達橘園的方式，時間，及當時的天氣狀況；
你在橘子采摘節(jié)的所見所聞。
注意：日記格式已給出；詞數(shù)120左右；可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫
Saturday, Nov.15                                               Sunny
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Answer 1

Today, a sunny day, Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival, which started at 8 o’clock in the morning.
When the organizer announced the rules of the festival, we were led into the orange garden by beautiful girls in red, group by group. While walking along the country road, we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing. The air was much fresher and cleaner than that in the city we are living in. During the festival, we enjoyed sweet oranges, watched some exciting performances and learned many stories about the town and its kind people. At about five in the afternoon, we had to say goodbye to the garden and went back home. Both Li Hua and I enjoyed ourselves and hoped to visit the again soon.
What an unforgettable day!

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假如你是高中生李華，請根據(jù)以下要點，以日記的形式，敘述你在11月15日（周六）參加在鄉(xiāng)下橘子采摘節(jié)（Orange-picking Festival）的活動情況。你到達橘園的方式，時間，及當時的天氣狀況；你在橘子采摘節(jié)的所見所聞。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】Today, a sunny day, Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival, which started at 8 o’clock in the morning.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。When the organizer announced the rules of the festival, we were led into the orange garden by beautiful girls in red, group by group.這里含有一個時間狀語從句。While walking along the country road, we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing.這是現(xiàn)在分詞作時間狀語。
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