Question

【題目】你校美國(guó)交換生 Clement很喜歡中華成語(yǔ)故事，看到下面的圖片，想了解關(guān)于此圖片的具體信息，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 描述畫(huà)面；

2. 概述其含義；

3. 談?wù)剛�(gè)人感想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】As you can see, in the picture, an old man along with his family is breaking up rocks and carrying the earth. They are trying to remove the mountains standing near his home

The story, from an ancient Chinese idom, goes like this: once upon a time, there lived an old man who was nearly 90 years old. His home faced two high mountains, making it inconvenient for him and his family to get around. Troubled by the great inconvenience, the old man discussed with his family and decided to remove the mountains which blocked the way. They kept moving them day after day.

Of course, things are totally different today. With society developing, we can build a road or tunnel rather than remove the mountains. But what is reflected in the story counts. It tells us that whatever difficulty we meet, we should never give up. If we don’t have the courage and determination to overcome every difficulty, nothing will be accomplished.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，1. 描述畫(huà)面；2. 概述其含義；3. 談?wù)剛�(gè)人感想。第二，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)，兼用第一人稱(chēng)。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫(xiě)作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，描述畫(huà)面。第二段，概述其含義。第三段，談?wù)剛�(gè)人感想。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): ancient ，face，inconvenient，encourage ,determination ,break up rocks and carry the earth，remove the mountains，get around，decide to do sth , block the way, keep doing sth, build a road, give up, overcome every difficulty, accomplish。

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)His home faced two high mountains, making it inconvenient for him and his family to get around.過(guò)去分詞作原因狀語(yǔ)和which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句 Troubled by the great inconvenience, the old man discussed with his family and decided to remove the mountains which blocked the way. what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句what is reflected in the story counts. that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和whatever 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句It tells us that whatever difficulty we meet, we should never give up. if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句 If we don’t have the courage and determination to overcome every difficulty, nothing will be accomplished。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Of course，But 。

第六步：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。