3．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack想?yún)⒓又醒腚娨暸_(tái)的星光大道（Avenue of Stars），特寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示給他寫(xiě)一封回信，告知相關(guān)事宜．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．簡(jiǎn)單介紹星光大道：普通人展示才藝的舞臺(tái)，深受觀(guān)眾喜愛(ài)；
2．參賽選手展示才藝：唱歌、跳舞等；
3．報(bào)名：網(wǎng)上提前報(bào)名；
4．建議：學(xué)一些簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)．
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔．
參考詞匯：參賽選手 participant
Dear Jack，
                                              
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】在對(duì)于諸如此類(lèi)提綱類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作，要善于使用不同的句型．英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換．學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)也要注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型如范文中I'm very glad to hear that…；I sincerely hope…等自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，本文運(yùn)用了participate in、including、show one's talents、apply for等短語(yǔ)和單詞．本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如I suggest that you learn a little Chinese so that you will be better understood．目的狀語(yǔ)從句，I sincerely hope you will be elected and come to China soon．運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句，It is loved deeply by the audience and introduced a lot of grassroots stars運(yùn)用了be deeply by的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，這樣文章才能寫(xiě)出新意．

解答 Dear Jack，
      I'm very glad to hear that you want to participate in the program Avenue of Stars on CCTV．
      Avenue of Stars provides a stage for ordinary people to show their talents．It is loved deeply by the audience and introduced a lot of grassroots stars，including some foreigners．（高分句型一）The participants should show their talents，such as singing，dancing and so on．As you are a foreigner，I suggest that you learn a little Chinese so that you will be better understood．（高分句型二）You have to apply for it on the related website in advance．
      I sincerely hope you will be elected and come to China soon．Then I will cheer for you on the spot．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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