Question

13．據(jù)報(bào)道，9月26日，昆明市某小學(xué)發(fā)生踩踏事故，造成多人死傷的慘�。�校園安全這一話題再次敲響了警鐘．為了杜絕此類問(wèn)題發(fā)生，請(qǐng)就"如何防踩踏"問(wèn)題寫一篇不少于120個(gè)詞數(shù)的短文．要點(diǎn)如下：
簡(jiǎn)單描述事件內(nèi)容；
事故后的個(gè)人感受；
預(yù)防踩踏措施（如：不蜂擁，靠右行，不推擠等）
參考詞匯：校園踩踏：school stampede；推擠：push and squeeze
When it comes to the campus security，we have to take it seriously．It was reported that______．

Answer 1

分析 本文為話題作文．
話題背景為：9月26日，昆明市某小學(xué)發(fā)生踩踏事故，造成多人死傷的慘�。�校園安全這一話題再次敲響了警鐘．
寫作主題為：如何防踩踏
寫作要點(diǎn)為：寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，描述圖畫內(nèi)容；2，分析原因；3，提供建議．

解答 One possible version：
When it comes to the campus security，we have to take it seriously．It was reported that a school stampede in Kunming City had caused several deaths and injuries at a local primary school on September 26th，which again shocked the people all over the country．
I felt very sorry about it．The stampede accident left me deep in thought．As students，what should we do to avoid it in future？Here are some tips．
Firstly，don't rush out at the time after class or school．You'd better wait to leave until there are fewer people．Secondly，learn to walk on the right side when walking with a crowd of people．Stay alert and watch your steps．Besides，stand still and try to hold on to something when there is pushing and squeezing．Last but not the least，once a stampede happens，you should curl up your body and bend your legs to protect your organs．
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點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需根據(jù)圖畫信息，揭示圖畫中的道理，根據(jù)所提供信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．