假如你是成都七中的學(xué)生葉子,你的網(wǎng)友Peter聽說美國第一夫人米歇爾(Michelle Obama)訪問了你的學(xué)校,他想了解當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)給Peter回一封郵件。
1. 具體情況:1)發(fā)表演講并與學(xué)生互動(dòng);2)與40名學(xué)生上了一堂英語課;
3)參與了一節(jié)太極課。
2. 發(fā)表自己的感想。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;     2.可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語已為你寫好; 4. 參考詞匯:太極------ Tai Chi
Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school.                                              
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi


Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school. Now, I am writing to share some information and my feelings with you.
Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us. Then /Afterwards, she participated in an English class with 40 students and had a lively discussion on varieties of topics including how students can deal with competition and failure, the value of studying abroad. What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
Although the First Lady did not spend a long time here, her visit really impressed me and made me know more about American education and culture. I sincerely hope that our school can organize more cultural exchange activities like this to broaden our horizons and enrich our lives.
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

解析試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文。假如你是成都七中的學(xué)生葉子,你的網(wǎng)友Peter聽說美國第一夫人米歇爾(Michelle Obama)訪問了你的學(xué)校,他想了解當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)給Peter回一封郵件。1. 具體情況:1)發(fā)表演講并與學(xué)生互動(dòng);2)與40名學(xué)生上了一堂英語課; 3)參與了一節(jié)太極課。2. 發(fā)表自己的感想。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出,需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子,適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容,使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.這里含有一個(gè)定語從句;What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class. 這里含有一個(gè)主語從句和一個(gè)表語從句。
考點(diǎn):提綱類書面表達(dá)

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