Question

最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“After-class activities”的欄目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)。

1. 你參加的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的好處。（社團(tuán)活動(dòng)；體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；上網(wǎng)…）

2. 為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 稿件的開頭以為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 注釋：社團(tuán)--- club

After-school activities

Nowadays, after- school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】

After-school activities

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much.

In my spare time, doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. Besides building up my body and enriching / increasing my knowledge (broadening my minds / horizons), they also relax me after a long day of hard work. In addition, I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people.

Here I have some suggestions. As students, you’d better choose after-school activities that interest you and suit you. It’s also very important for you to balance well between studies and activities.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，話題是After-class activities，和學(xué)生的生活密切相關(guān)，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，1. 你參加的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的好處。（社團(tuán)活動(dòng)；體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；上網(wǎng)…）

2. 為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議。具體內(nèi)容還要考生自己發(fā)揮，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文的句子：doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. 和I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people. 還要適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章連貫起來：如：besides，in addition等。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。