Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面有關(guān)學(xué)生自理能力的漫畫及相關(guān)文字，并按要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Many students rely too much on their parents about daily issues.

(Friday afternoon. On the phone.)

Son: Mum?

Mother: Yes?

Son: All of my socks are dirty. What shall I do?

Mother: No worry! I’ll help you this weekend.

Son: ...

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30詞概括漫畫的主要內(nèi)容；

2.分析學(xué)生自理能力差的原因，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄉ鲜鰧?duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn))；

3.談?wù)勅绾卧鰪?qiáng)學(xué)生的自理能力。

【寫作要求】

1.可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves. (30 words)

Personally, these students, along with their parents, should take the blame for their inability to attend to themselves. For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes. That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills. For another, the indulgence of parents encourages the laziness of these students. Some parents even go to extremes to mirco-control every little detail of their children. They somewhat discourage their children from trying to live their life independently.

Therefore, to help them become independent and capable, parents should loose control on their children, while children should learn to take more responsibilities for themselves. (120 words)

【解析】試題分析：

本文要求根據(jù)漫畫和文字內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于一些學(xué)生自理能力差的文章。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：介紹漫畫內(nèi)容（注意詞數(shù)限制在30個(gè)單詞之內(nèi)）；第二段：分析學(xué)生自理能力差的原因，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄓ?/span>personally, for one thing，for another ，therefore等使這部分流暢，注意這部分的兩方面內(nèi)容：分析原因，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ�；第三段：如何增�?qiáng)學(xué)生的自理能力（父母和孩子雙方面努力）。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

1.使用高級(jí)句型：定語(yǔ)從句的使用As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves.；現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes.；表語(yǔ)從句的使用That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills.等等。2.使用了過渡詞語(yǔ)：Personally, For one thing，F(xiàn)or another等。3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：along with 以及；take…for granted認(rèn)為…理所當(dāng)然；take responsibilities負(fù)責(zé)，承擔(dān)責(zé)任。