請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合生活中的事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing. It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.

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除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；

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Encouragement can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.

 

 

 

 

 

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Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times. The best ones to encourage a depressed soul are our friends.

It was three years age when I just began to attend High School. For the first time I failed in an English exam which I had thought I was best at. I felt very depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried to comfort me, offering her emotional support. She listened to me carefully and told me Edison succeeded in inventing the electric bulb after failing more than 300 times. Eventually, with her patient encouragement, I overcome depress and was determined to try hard again. In the next exam, I did it.

Encouragement is the best means to help someone feel better. It can give the courage to fight difficulties and motivate someone to move on.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)提示判斷本文屬于話題作文。通過(guò)提示語(yǔ)Encouragement can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.可總結(jié)出命題者讓學(xué)生寫(xiě)的話題即encouragement鼓勵(lì)。在談到“encouragement”的時(shí)候，同學(xué)們很容易聯(lián)想到“friend”。這樣“結(jié)合生活中的實(shí)際事例”這一要求就很容易達(dá)到，第二段的構(gòu)思難度較小。然而，正因?yàn)閑ncouragement這一話題貼近生活，寫(xiě)作難度小，文章寫(xiě)作就更考驗(yàn)學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作功底。故在文章的構(gòu)詞，層次安排和選詞搭配上要仔細(xì)斟酌。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，層次十分清晰，給閱卷老師一種干脆利落的感覺(jué)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)為傳統(tǒng)的三段式，第一段開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，The best ones to encourage a depressed soul are our friends.點(diǎn)明本文的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容為來(lái)自朋友的鼓勵(lì)。第二段緊扣第一段的內(nèi)容，詳細(xì)描述了朋友在“我”考試失利后給予鼓勵(lì)的事情。并在描述事例的過(guò)程中引用Edison succeeded in inventing the electric bulb after failing more than 300 times的故事，增強(qiáng)了事例的可讀性。第三段用兩句話簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)上文，并進(jìn)一步深化主題。此外，文章靈活使用各種句型如定語(yǔ)從句I failed in an English exam which I had thought I was best at，同位語(yǔ)和插入語(yǔ)My best friend, Lily, tried to comfort me, offering her emotional support等。文章中長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，也顯示了作者深厚的作文功底。

 

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