Question

【題目】寫作

目前，學校存在少數(shù)考生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學生征文，標題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：

主要原因	考試偏多、偏難
	不用功、懶惰
	取悅父母、老師
個人看法	作弊不對，違反校規(guī)
	……（其他看法）

注意：

1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮。

2．詞數(shù)：100左右；

3．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v. ）。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of the students are too lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons or studies. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please both parents and teachers.In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest to try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提綱作文，說明對考試作弊現(xiàn)象的觀點。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照提示的2個方面（1.原因；2. 個人觀點）的內(nèi)容進行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般將來時說明情況。分別以第三人稱和第一人稱為主。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，用On the other hand, so，What’s more和 In my opinion使層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如非謂語動詞when taking examinations, it is wrong to cheat 和非限制性定語從句which are too difficult for us.。還有短語instead of, get well prepared for等。