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目前，越來(lái)越多的家長(zhǎng)花巨資送孩子出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，某英文報(bào)社就這一問(wèn)題做了調(diào)查，并開(kāi)辟了專(zhuān)欄討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給的提示，以 On Teenagers Studying Overseas 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。   
1．目前，很多家長(zhǎng)都送孩子出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，且呈低齡化，但部分教育工作者和家長(zhǎng)都不贊成這種做法。
2．38％的人贊成這種做法 ①這樣孩子可以接受良好的教育；②學(xué)好外語(yǔ)將來(lái)發(fā)展的機(jī)會(huì)更多等。62％的人不贊成這種做法 ①花錢(qián)太多，是在國(guó)內(nèi)花費(fèi)的10倍；②孩子太小，在陌生的環(huán)境中容易學(xué)壞等。
3．你的看法。（啟示，政府應(yīng)該建立各類(lèi)學(xué)校以適應(yīng)人們的需求等。）
注意：1．文章的起始句已給出；可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：150左右（不包括已給的起始句）；
3．參考詞匯：教育工作者-- educationists
On Teenagers Studying Overseas
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children overseas for further study,
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Answer 1

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Nowadays more and more people are sending their children overseas for further study, even at middle school age. 38% of the people investigated agreed to this. They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well. And they have more golden opportunities to develop themselves. What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world.
However, over 62% of the people, especially some educationists and parents, are not in favor of this, for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China, besides, children are too young to take care of themselves. Many parents worry about the safety of their children. What’s more, they might follow bad examples.
In my opinion, measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people.

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類(lèi)作文，短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。首先要說(shuō)明很多家長(zhǎng)都送孩子出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)這樣一種現(xiàn)象，把題干中的漢語(yǔ)翻譯成英語(yǔ)，然后發(fā)表個(gè)人感想。需要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合文章內(nèi)容。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有文采。
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