Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 (∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線 (﹨) 劃掉。

修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Though born into an ordinary family, Pitt showed her interest in filming at an early age. After he leaves high school, he went to university to study law. Because he loved filming more than law, shortly after he was going to graduate, he dropped out to beginning a new life. With only 325 dollars in hand, he worked sometimes as a porter or a waiter. Pitt made his firstly appearance in a film in 1990. He cared less about good roles than money. After reading a screenplay of Legends of the Fall, he attracted by the role. He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film, that turned out to be a big success.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】her→his

【2】leaves→left

【3】after→before

【4】beginning→begin

【5】firstly→first

【6】less→more

【7】a→the

【8】加was

【9】condition→conditions

【10】that→which

【解析】

試題分析：本文講了Pitt出于對表演的喜愛，輟學(xué)做一個演員，最后取得成功的故事。

【1】her→his根據(jù)下文After he leaves high school可知Pitt為男生，故改為his。

【2】leaves→left 根據(jù)文章，全文為一般過去時，故改為left。

【3】after→before根據(jù)句意因?yàn)楸绕鸱�律他更喜歡電影，在他快畢業(yè)之前他輟學(xué)了。根據(jù)he was going to graduate和dropped out提示可知是在他快畢業(yè)之前，故改為before。

【4】beginning→begin動詞不定式to do表示目的，根據(jù)句意他輟學(xué)去開始新生活，表目的，故改為begin。

【5】firstly→first形容詞修飾名詞，first修飾appearance，故改為first。

【6】less→more根據(jù)下文He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film可知比起錢他更在意角色，故改為more。

【7】a→the此處為特指screenplay of Legends of the Fall，故改為the。

【8】加was此處為被動語態(tài)，他被角色吸引，根據(jù)by the role提示，故加was。

【9】condition→conditions此處condition為可數(shù)名詞，前沒有冠詞限制，所以應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)，故改為conditions。

【10】that→which此處which作關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句，故改為which。