Question

請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
提示詞：仙人掌   cactus
刺       thorn

Answer 1

One possible version:
Seeing the picture, I can’t help thinking how silly the boy is! He is cutting the thorns off the cactus. Maybe he thinks the thorns will hurt him. But a cactus without thorns is not a cactus anymore. What’s more, cutting down thorns can cause deadly effects because thorns can prevent loss of water and protect cactuses from birds and animals.
Just like the boy, we human beings always try to change nature according to our will. For many years we have been doing things against nature, just for our own benefits. Now we are suffering from the disasters we have caused---pollution, climate change, deforestation and so on. I think it’s time for us to correct our mistakes and learn to respect nature.

解析試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)撊藗兂７傅倪`背自然規(guī)律的事情。寫作前對(duì)圖畫進(jìn)行仔細(xì)分析，包括英語提示，了解圖畫想要表達(dá)的主旨，用自己的語言陳述觀點(diǎn)和理由，需要注意緊扣文章主題，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點(diǎn)：考查看圖作文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)，說明文或議論文，考生首先要對(duì)圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。