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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，David是你的美國朋友。他對(duì)你所在的城市最近推廣使用公共自行車很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.感謝他的關(guān)注；

2.簡要分析推廣公共自行車的原因與好處；

3.談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/span>

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已經(jīng)為你寫好。

2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：推廣 promotion 公共自行車public bicycles 低碳生活 low-carbon life

Dear David，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m glad you’ve noticed the promotion of public bicycles in our city. Thank you for your concern.

With rapid development of our city in recent years, the number of private cars is on the increase, making the streets more and more crowded. To relieve the traffic pressure, public bicycle service is provided in our city. This makes it more convenient for us to get around and the traffic is no longer as crowded as before. At the same time, it greatly reduces air pollution. Besides, the bicycle riders can get plenty of exercise as well.

I hope that the use of public bicycles will become more and more popular and everyone can live a low-carbon life.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章主題和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，但需要考生在寫作時(shí)，合理發(fā)揮想象力，做到有話可說，使文章的表達(dá)自然，豐滿。

注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。2不能簡單羅列要點(diǎn)，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使行文連貫。3. 注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以提高文章的檔次。4. 注意字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右。5.規(guī)范謄寫，使卷面整潔。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

With rapid development of our city in recent years, the number of private cars is on the increase, making the streets more and more crowded.短語on the increase較新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了doing作結(jié)果狀語。

public bicycle service is provided in our city.此處不強(qiáng)調(diào)主語，使用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)，更加地道。

本文運(yùn)用this makes…, at the same time, besides等銜接詞活語句，避免了句子間生硬銜接，使行文流暢地道。