Question

10．假如你叫李華，你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack來(lái)信說(shuō)他要來(lái)中國(guó)旅游．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要求給Jack寫一封回信．
1、歡迎Jack來(lái)華，邀請(qǐng)他到家做客．
2、詢問(wèn)他是否可以到你的班級(jí)來(lái)做一個(gè)演講，介紹英國(guó)文化．
3、給他提一點(diǎn)中國(guó)旅游方面的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
      ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)文章所給的信息提示寫一封邀請(qǐng)信．寫作要點(diǎn)包括向Jack發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，包含三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：邀請(qǐng)來(lái)家做客、到班級(jí)做場(chǎng)報(bào)告并給出在中國(guó)旅游的建議等．寫作時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱和第二人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：give sb some advice about doing sth給某人一些關(guān)于做某事的建議；pay a visit to sp．參觀某地；make a speech about（做一場(chǎng)關(guān)于…的講座/報(bào)告）；expect to do sth期待做某事；recommend doing sth推薦做某事；places of interest風(fēng)景名勝；
高分句型：
1．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．本句中包含一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
2．I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．本句中有一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm very glad to know that you are going to visit China during your summer holiday．Since China is a big country，I'd like to give you some advice about visiting China．I sincerely hope you can pay a visit to my home，where everyone of my family welcome you warmly．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．（高分句型）I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．（高分句型）
 If you want to travel in our country，I recommend visiting many places of interest，such as Xi'an，Beijing，Guilin and so on，where there are many famous sites for you to visit．（提出建議）
I'm looking forward to your coming．（表達(dá)期望）
Yours，
Lihua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)于書信類的書面表達(dá)不僅要在表達(dá)內(nèi)容上，也要在書面形式上多下功夫．一定要注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，使別人看起來(lái)耳目一新，具有整體美感，并且要使用一些高級(jí)句式，主從復(fù)合句等來(lái)提高自己的作文檔次．