Question

最近，某中學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)向?qū)W生征文，主題New Look of My Hometown。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)為該報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的情況并發(fā)表自己的看法。

概 況	1．氣候夏熱多雨，冬冷多雪，冬夏溫差很大 2．近年經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速，城市面貌一新，高樓林立，道路寬敞，環(huán)境優(yōu)美； 3．人民生活條件不斷改善，不少人搬進(jìn)新居，擁有私家車。
你的看法	家鄉(xiāng)人民將更加努力工作……

注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文連貫、通順；

2．短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)100左右。

參考詞匯：economy經(jīng)濟(jì) 

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of  Liaoning ，with a river flowing through．_____________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of Liaoning, with a river flowing through．It is a beautiful city．The climate here is warm with plenty of rain in summer and cold with plenty of snow in winter．There is a sharp difference in temperature between summer and winter. 

In recent years，the economy of the city has been developing rapidly．The city is taking on a new look with high buildings，wide roads and better surroundings．People’s living conditions are improving day by day．Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own．

I’m sure people in my hometown will work still harder to make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。