Question

春節(jié)剛過不久，許多人都患上了節(jié)后綜合癥。請你根據以下要求描述該現象并發(fā)表自己的看法。

要求：1．癥狀： 郁悶；無法集中注意力；嗜睡；感覺筋疲力盡等。

2．原因： 節(jié)日期間飲食太過油膩；思想過于放松，無法適應工作或學習中的新挑戰(zhàn)。

3．危害： 不是疾病，但卻會潛在地影響健康。

4．應對： 多吃水果蔬菜；看醫(yī)生等。 

注意： 詞數100左右； 開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

癥狀symptom

The Spring Festival has just passed. and many people suffer from post-holiday syndromes.____________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The Spring Festival has just passed, and many people suffer from post-holiday syndrome． They share the similar symptoms． Fretful and blue, they feel exhausted and always fight to keep their eyes open; of course, they can't concentrate．They eat too much food that is rich in fat． And being too relaxed during the festival so that they can't be accustomed to the new challenges at work must be the leading cause． Though it is not some disease, it also can be potentially damaging their hearth． Try to ease back into the normal lifestyle, and eat more fruits and vegetables, which will be the best way for them to recover． They can even pay a visit to a doctor． Hope everybody can adjust themselves to the new beginning as soon as possible．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。