Question

5．下面這幅漫畫反映了目前家庭教育的一個(gè)側(cè)面，請(qǐng)以Proper Family Education為題，用英語寫一篇短文．根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容，結(jié)合目前的素質(zhì)教育和新的人才觀，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
      2．參考詞匯：素質(zhì)教育quality education；人才觀view of talent
 
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Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．根據(jù)對(duì)圖片的理解及英語提示寫一篇短文．首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，分析其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)部分
Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）本句有定語從句，holding屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語
Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）本句含有what引導(dǎo)的主語從句
Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）本句有only+狀語引起半倒裝

解答 Proper Family Education
     Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）He gets only 40 points．His father says angrily，"You can only become a worker in the future depending on your quality．"And his mother says，"Even become a peasant，I think．"What's your idea after seeing this cartoon？I disagree with his parents．
     First，in terms of quality education，their words are totally wrong．Because low points in exams doesn't mean poor qualities at all．Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）Second，in terms of view of talent，good workers and peasants are talents as well as so-called white-collar．They are just different categories of work．Who dare say we don't need skilled workers or peasants in our daily life？
     All in all，proper family education is urgently needed．Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．