Question

【題目】團(tuán)隊合作(teamwork)在現(xiàn)代是非常重要的。請根據(jù)以下要點，簡要寫一篇關(guān)于teamwork的演講稿，并表明你自己的看法。

一．合作重要性：

1.在學(xué)習(xí)和工作中的重要性；

2.節(jié)約時間精力和資源；

3.彼此有相互學(xué)習(xí)的機會。

二. 在學(xué)習(xí)中怎樣與人合作。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)：120字左右；

2.演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.

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Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.

In this modern world, if we want to complete our work more efficiently, there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others. No only can cooperation save us lots of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other.

We’ll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other . As a senior three student, in our study we should learn to cooperate with others. For example,…

Personally, teamwork means we should try to combine our ideas with others’.

Thanks for your listening.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知內(nèi)容要點：，一．合作重要性：1. 是學(xué)習(xí)和工作的重要性；2.節(jié)約時間精力和資源；3.彼此有相互學(xué)習(xí)的機會。二. 在學(xué)習(xí)中怎樣與人合作。三. 自己的觀點。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱和第三人稱。詞數(shù)120左右，不要太多或太少。語言基本無誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：who引導(dǎo)的定語從句、No only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句，that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句等都很不錯。