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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國(guó)內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級(jí)討論的情況。請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。贊成遷出：1. 游客多，交通堵塞2. 郊區(qū)環(huán)境好。

反對(duì)遷出：1. 建于1906年，中外聞名2. 搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100– 120;

2. 適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使充實(shí)、行文連貫，請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)be against 反對(duì)；be well-known出名；what’s more而且；Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句； However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；