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2．假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國朋友Jenny的來信．她在信中說，由于剛進入高中，還不能適應新環(huán)境，不知道如何去結交新朋友，因而情緒低落．請你給她回信，內容如下：
（1）向Jenny表示問候和安慰（你的同學和你面臨同樣的問題，所以不必過于擔心）；
（2）針對她的問題提出以下建議：
①放學后邀請同學一起參加活動，這有助于你們互相更好地了解；
②你的同學遇到麻煩時，你去幫助他們；
③你遇到困難時向同學求助．
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
參考詞匯：參加take part in
Dear Jenny，I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
Bestwishes，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國朋友Jenny的來信．她在信中說，由于剛進入高中，還不能適應新環(huán)境，不知道如何去結交新朋友，因而情緒低落．請你給她回信，內容如下：1．向Jenny表示問候和安慰（你的同學和你面臨同樣的問題，所以不必過于擔心）；2．針對她的問題提出以下建議：（1）放學后邀請同學一起參加活動，這有助于你們互相更好地了解；（2）你的同學遇到麻煩時，你去幫助他們；（3）你遇到困難時向同學求助．語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點說明】There is also something that you can do to change this situation．運用定語從句；This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．運用比較級；Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．運用時間狀語從句；You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次．
You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）
Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
       I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．