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13．和睦的家庭有利于孩子的個性發(fā)展和家人的身心健康．請你根據(jù)表格中的信息，以How we can build up a harmonious family 為題用英語寫一篇短文．
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題目	How We can Build up a Harmonious Family
主要特征	充滿溫暖、愛心和歡笑；相互關(guān)愛、尊重和理解
主要益處	生長在和睦家庭環(huán)境中的孩子會樂觀向上 生活在和睦家庭中的父母會健康快樂
父母該怎么做	言行舉止上做好表率；經(jīng)常與孩子溝通交流
我們該怎么做	體諒父母的艱辛，減輕負(fù)擔(dān)，主動做家務(wù)等

[寫作要求]（1 ）只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容．題目，文章開頭與結(jié)尾已給出．
（2 ）句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
表率：role model．How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health．A harmonious family is always full of warmth，love and laughter in which parents and children not only show concern for each other bu also respect and understand each other．If a child grows up in a harmonious family，he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic．Meanwhile，parents in a harmonious family are sure in live happily and more healthily．To create such a harmonious family parents should be rule models for their children in words and behavior and often communicate with them．As children of the family，we should show understanding for our parents'hardship，and try in share their burdens by doing housework voluntarily and so on．If you do so，our home will always be harmonious．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇主題為How we can build up a harmonious family．
寫作要點為：1，主要特征；2，主要益處；3，父母該怎么做；4，我們該怎么做．

解答 How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health．A harmonious family is always full of warmth，love and laughter in which parents and children not only show concern for each other bu also respect and understand each other．If a child grows up in a harmonious family，he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic．Meanwhile，parents in a harmonious family are sure in live happily and more healthily．To create such a harmonious family parents should be rule models for their children in words and behavior and often communicate with them．As children of the family，we should show understanding for our parents'hardship，and try in share their burdens by doing housework voluntarily and so on．If you do so，our home will always be harmonious．

點評 考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．