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12．進(jìn)入高三以后，很多學(xué)校都取消了體育鍛煉．對此情況，有人贊同有人反對．關(guān)于這一話題，你們在班上進(jìn)行了激烈的討論，請將討論情況用英語寫出來．
贊成的人認(rèn)為：1．浪費時間； 2．…．
反對的人認(rèn)為：1．可以使人放松； 2．…．
你的看法：…
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Grade 3should take physical exercise．
                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息進(jìn)入高三以后，很多學(xué)校都取消了體育鍛煉．對此情況，有人贊同有人反對．關(guān)于這一話題，你們在班上進(jìn)行了激烈的討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從正反觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：take exercise做鍛煉；build up our body強(qiáng)身健體；Besides另外；However然而；a waste of time浪費時間；In addition另外；Personally就個人而言；keep fit保持健康；
Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）
They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）
In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）

解答 We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise．Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）Besides，it makes us completely relaxed after long-time study in classroom．
      However，the other students are against taking regular exercise．They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）
      Personally，we need to take physical exercise on a regular basis to keep fit because nothing is more important than good health．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．