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12．假定你是李華，暑假參加了澳大利亞游學(xué)活動(dòng)，回國(guó)后給host family寫一封信表示感謝，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．感謝他們一家的照顧；
2．分享游學(xué)體會(huì)；
3．詢問你寄的禮物（漢語詞典）是否收到；
4．邀請(qǐng)他們一家來中國(guó)游覽．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
 3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Helen，
        ．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是常見書信類作文，首先，要注意書信的格式；其次，作文要包含所有要點(diǎn)，并根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)恼归_；最后，表示感謝的同時(shí)送上自己美好的祝愿．
時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱．
高分句型：
①It was your help and kindness that made my stay in you country so enjoyable．
It was…that…強(qiáng)調(diào)句的使用，突出表達(dá)了help and kindness
 ②And by communicating with you as well as other locals，I practiced my oral english so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now．
 as well as 短語：以及，還；
so…that…如此…以至于…
as fluently as  像…一樣流利
③What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got．
感嘆句的使用強(qiáng)調(diào) 這次經(jīng)歷的意義所在．
④I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning．
固定句型be+of+名詞．對(duì)…有所幫助．

解答 Dear Helen，
     I'v arrived home safe and sound．I miss you so much，and how i want to say"thank you'to your whole famiy．①It was your help and kindness that made my stay in you country so enjoyable．
    The beautiful scenery and rich traditional Australian culture impressed me a lot．②And by communicating with you as well as other locals，I practiced my oral english so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now．③What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got．
    Have you received the chinese dictionary？It is a gift for you．④I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning．I'm keenly expecting you to China soon．
   Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生在寫作之前首先要認(rèn)真審題，內(nèi)容要全部包括在寫作中．句式表達(dá)要在正確的同時(shí)，盡量用高級(jí)句型來增加文章的檔次，要求考生在平時(shí)多積累高級(jí)詞匯和句型．