Question

在我們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中，與人合作是非常重要的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為 “Cooperate with others”的英文演講稿。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)在答題紙相應(yīng)橫線上。

為何與人合作	可以高效地完成任務(wù)； 可以節(jié)省時(shí)間和精力； 可以從合作者身上學(xué)到很多。
與誰(shuí)合作	與喜歡的人合作	心情愉快，一起分享工作中的快樂(lè)和痛苦。
與不喜歡的人 合作	能挑戰(zhàn)自己與他人相處的能力。此外，關(guān)注工作比關(guān)注合作者本人更重要。日久，也許會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)他是一個(gè)很好相處的人。
怎樣做一個(gè)好的合作者	請(qǐng)你發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)……（至少2點(diǎn)看法）

注意：

1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2．詞數(shù)150左右。

參考詞匯：合作者 partner       高效地efficiently

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

                                                                                    

                                                                               

                                                                                      

                                                                                

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

Thank you for your listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

In our daily life and study, if we want to accomplish our work efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.

When we cooperate with someone we like, we will feel very happy. We can share our pleasure（joys）and sadness（sorrows）with him. But it challenges us to get along with others to cooperate with someone we dislike（hate）. Besides/Moreover/What’s more, we should focus on our work, instead of（rather than）our partners. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we’ll learn（find out）that he is a man to get along well with.

How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, we should try to listen to others. If they make mistakes, we also try to point them out. Thirdly, we mustn’t embarrass others to make them in unfavorable position.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文屬于演講類(lèi)文體，對(duì)于這類(lèi)作文需要學(xué)生寫(xiě)的盡量引人入勝，不可機(jī)械的翻譯，可以通過(guò)適當(dāng)?shù)脑O(shè)問(wèn)句來(lái)引起聽(tīng)眾的注意力，在寫(xiě)作中注意使用平時(shí)積累的“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的連詞，使用萬(wàn)能句型造句，最后提出自己的看法。提建議時(shí)可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開(kāi)闡述，以顯得層次分明。

考點(diǎn)：議論文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于作文的寫(xiě)作平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬(wàn)能句型的積累，高中作文寫(xiě)作，要注意在寫(xiě)作之前，首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來(lái)，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會(huì)錯(cuò)的。寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中，多注意靈活使用定語(yǔ)從句，包括非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。要熟悉英美人寫(xiě)文章的習(xí)慣，遇到專(zhuān)有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)唯一性。平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達(dá)，考試時(shí)才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。