Question

16．請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)以下兩幅圖的理解，以"Being a civilized passenger on the bus"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇作文．
你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；
2．概述你對(duì)圖中行為的看法；
3．說(shuō)明你如何做一個(gè)文明乘客．
注意：
1．可參照?qǐng)D片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；1
2．作文詞數(shù)120左右；標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文，內(nèi)容貼近考生的生活，具有時(shí)代性和可寫(xiě)性．要求考生就兩幅圖內(nèi)容，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ㄒ约叭绾卧诠�交�?chē)上做一名文明乘客，考生需要根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)歷，找出一些切實(shí)可行的方法，在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意高級(jí)詞匯和句型的使用，關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，可以為文章增色不少．
重要短語(yǔ)：
 come across （遇到）；as is shown in the pictures above（如上圖所示）； the awareness of （…的意識(shí)）； attach importance to（強(qiáng)調(diào)…的重要性）；
高分句型：
1．As is shown in the pictures above，some passengers eat food with strong smell，such as steamed bun with meat stuffing．該句靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯及短語(yǔ)描述公交車(chē)上的不文明現(xiàn)象．
2．They reveal an undesirable situation that some passengers lack the awareness of good public manners．靈活運(yùn)用reveal，situation，the awareness of 等詞匯及短語(yǔ)．
3．Also，we should avoid annoying behaviors on the bus，such as spitting，littering，swearing，grabbing seats and so on．該句靈活運(yùn)用詞匯及短語(yǔ)．
4．Only when we behave decently can we become civilized passengers．該句為倒裝句型．

解答 Being a civilized passenger on the bus
It is not uncommon to come across uncivilized behaviors on the bus．As is shown in the pictures above，some passengers eat food with strong smell，such as steamed bun with meat stuffing．（高分句型1）Some speak loudly on the mobile phone as if there were nobody but himself on the bus．（描述圖片內(nèi)容）
Both of the above behaviors are socially unacceptable．They reveal an undesirable situation that some passengers lack the awareness of good public manners．（高分句型2）Without realizing that they are sharing the communal public space，they show no respect for other bus riders．The only thing they care about is their own interest and comfort．（自己的看法）
As middle school students，we should attach importance to good manners in public．We should not jump the queue when waiting for the bus．Also，we should avoid annoying behaviors on the bus，such as spitting，littering，swearing，grabbing seats and so on．（高分句型3）Only when we behave decently can we become civilized passengers．（高分句型4）（如何做一名文明乘客）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否切合所給主題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意正確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文注意連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需要注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．