Question

I am writing this letter to express my regret that I can’t go to the Great Wall with you next weekend. It’s really pity. I feel sorry for them and want you to know that happened.

    Yesterday, my father, worked in the United States now, informed me that he would be back to home tomorrow. I was very happy when I heard the news. Father and I had not seen each other for two years, but I am really looking forward to this meeting.

    I sincere hope that you can be able to think in my position and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to make another dates to go to the Great Wall.

Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 really 和pity 之間加a

 them →it

 that →what

 worked→working

 去掉to

 had →have

 but →so

 sincere → sincerely

 can →will

 dates →date

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封道歉信：我很遺憾和抱歉不能在下周末和你一起去長城玩，因為我現(xiàn)在在美國工作的爸爸通知我他明天回家，因為兩年沒見，所以很期待這次見面。希望你諒解并接受我的道歉，我們可否改日再一起去長城。再次為帶來的不便表示歉意。

 pity  做可數(shù)名詞是：可惜的事。It’s a pity 意為： 這事很可惜。

 本句應(yīng)該理解為：我為此感到很抱歉。代詞應(yīng)該指代前面的這件事要用it 。

  know 后是賓語從句，在賓語從句中that 只起連接作用，而what 要做句子成分，在這里作主語用what。

 my father 后面還有逗號，所以用非謂語形式作定語，worked表示和主語是邏輯上的被動關(guān)系，而work 與主語是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用working 。

 home是副詞，副詞前不用介詞。所以去掉前面的to 。

 通讀全文和本句的for two years 提示本句應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時，主語是復(fù)數(shù)Father and I ，所以謂語要用助動詞have 以保持主謂一致。

 通過分析前后關(guān)系可知，這里是因果關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。So 意為“所以”。

  sincerely 副詞修飾動詞 hope.。英語中習(xí)慣用形容詞修飾名詞， 副詞修飾動詞。

 can 和 be able to 是一個意思，不能同時用。用will 表將來。

 make another date 意為：改日。another 意為：另一個，后面要用單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞。

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯。