Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你打算參加11月份舉行的武漢市中學(xué)生英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義寫一篇主題為“感恩”的演講稿。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.回顧高中階段你周圍的人是如何默默幫助你的；

2.你會(huì)成為一個(gè)懂得感恩的人嗎？說說你的打算。

注意：

詞數(shù)：120詞左右。

開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here．

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Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Today, I’d like to express my gratitude to my English teacher. To my regret, my English suffered greatly in the first year and I fell far behind others. She showed the utmost patience when I asked her questions. In the meanwhile she instructed me how to adopt proper learning strategies, taking my academic performance into account. So occupied was she in helping me that she sometimes tended to skip her meals. Deeply inspired, I became more confident in learning English and my English has improved a lot.

I owe my progress to my English teacher, without whose unselfish guidance I wouldn’t have made such rapid progress. I appreciate all she has done for me, which motivates me to pass her dedication and love on. In my daily life, I will do my part to help others in need. For example, I will offer directions to strangers who look lost and shovel snow off someone else’s driveway. Here I appeal to everyone to assume the responsibility to show our gratitude to the world, however minor these acts of kindness are. It is due to thanking and caring for each other that we can enjoy the same sunshine and appreciate the same love under the same sky.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】這是一份演講稿，要求考生以“感恩”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿。稿件的主要內(nèi)容包括兩點(diǎn)。在寫作的時(shí)候，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)的不同給與文章不同的時(shí)態(tài)。第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般過去時(shí)；而第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)主要是用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱要以第一人稱為主。除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。