Question

下表是對(duì)某中學(xué)高二某班50個(gè)學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題的調(diào)查表。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，綜述學(xué)生當(dāng)前存在的健康問(wèn)題，并就中學(xué)生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。

問(wèn)題類(lèi)型	學(xué)習(xí)焦慮	逆反心理	缺乏交往	睡眠不足	缺乏鍛煉	視力不佳
人數(shù)	35	20	15	40	25	35
比例	70%	40%	30%	80%	50%	70%

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右  2．參考詞匯：學(xué)習(xí)焦慮learning anxiety

3．首句已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally,                                              ______ 

                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxiety as well as poor eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claim not to have enough communication with others.

As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.

【解析】本文是一份調(diào)查表，在審題的時(shí)候，一定要注意本文的時(shí)態(tài)，調(diào)查報(bào)告一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。同上注意分?jǐn)?shù)百分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)法，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句型如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等。也要使用合適的連接詞如As far as I am concerned，Therefore等讓文章更有條理。