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3．目前，父母對孩子的生活、學習等方面包辦現(xiàn)象非常普遍．請你根據(jù)以下提示，以We Want to Be Independent為題，用英語寫一篇短文．
1．描述這一現(xiàn)象及其弊端；
2．你認為父母應該…；
3．孩子應該…．．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．
該句使用了非謂語動詞，resulting in這是個現(xiàn)在分詞短語做狀語，比表示結(jié)果；在fact后面that引導的是一個同位語從句．
（高分句型二）Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．
該句型should be given是一個被動句型；in which case引導一個非限制性定語從句，意思是如果這種情況的話．
重點單詞和短語：result in 導致； be capable of 有能力的；be beneficial to 對…有好處；
還有很多的連接詞，如：therefore，meanwhile，as for，after all，beneficial to 讓整個文章非常順暢，過度很自然．

解答 Nowadays，some parents are too protective and they want to shelter their kids from any trouble．（高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．Therefore，something must be done about the situation．（列舉父母包辦現(xiàn)象）
   Parents are supposed to trust their children，which is beneficial to their growth．Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，（高分句型二）the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．（父母應該做的事情）
   （孩子應該做的事情）As for children，it's important for us to be self-confident； after all，we have grown up and we are expected to deal with our personal matters properly．What's more，when in trouble，we might as well face up to the challenges first because in most cases，our ability is established in the process of overcoming difficulties on our own．
    I'm sure that with efforts from both sides，the situation will be improved and we will actually be independent．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．