Question

13．下面這篇短文共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符合（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃-橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Five years ago，I had worked as a night guard in a factory．On a rainy night，all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden．I rushed out and could see nothing．Lucky for me，the warning system was directly connected with the police station．Three or four minutes late，four police car arrived at the front gate．They searched for the factory carefully，tried to find something unusual．In the end，I am told that the rain had brought  about   the short circuit，that caused the accident．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中講述了在一家工廠做保安時(shí)的一次經(jīng)歷，一個(gè)雨夜，工廠突然停電，最后經(jīng)過(guò)檢查發(fā)現(xiàn)原因是大雨導(dǎo)致了電線(xiàn)短路．

解答 Ten years ago，I had worked as a night guard in a factory．On a rainy night，all the lights of∧factory went out all of a sudden．I rushed out and could see nothing．Lucky for me，the warning system was directly connected with the police station．Three or four minutes late，four police car arrived at the front gate．They searched for the factory carefully，tried to find something unusual．In the end，I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit，that caused the accident．
詳解：
1．去掉had；從Ten years ago可知該句時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為過(guò)去時(shí)．
2．of后加the；考查定冠詞，factory已經(jīng)第二次提到，前面應(yīng)加the表示特指．
3．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，上下文是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故使用but，意為"我沖出去，但是什么也看不見(jiàn)"．
4．Lucky改為L(zhǎng)uckily；考查副詞，這里用副詞做狀語(yǔ)，修飾整個(gè)句子　luckily for sb．是一個(gè)固定搭配．
5．late改為later；later放在一段時(shí)間的后面，一段時(shí)間之后是"時(shí)間+later"．
6．car改為cars；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，car是可數(shù)名詞，前面有數(shù)詞four，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式cars．
7．去掉for；search for意為"尋找"，search意為"搜查"．search可以作為及物動(dòng)詞search the place搜查某地，警察已經(jīng)到了工廠，不再需要"尋找"．
8．tried改為trying；trying to find something unusual是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，they與try構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，使用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)
9．a(chǎn)m改為was；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為過(guò)去時(shí)．
10．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代上文提到的內(nèi)容．

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