19.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華.你的英國(guó)朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)歷史很感興趣,并請(qǐng)你介紹一位你喜歡的中國(guó)歷史人物.請(qǐng)你給Jim回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.該人物是誰(shuí);
2.該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn);
3.該人物對(duì)你的影響.
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華.你的英國(guó)朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)歷史很感興趣,并請(qǐng)你介紹一位你喜歡的中國(guó)歷史人物.請(qǐng)你給Jim回信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:該人物是誰(shuí);該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn);該人物對(duì)你的影響.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):hear from收到某人的信息;As for至于,關(guān)于;In fact事實(shí)上;opened our eyes大開(kāi)眼界;
I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
 As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)
He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Jim,
       It's great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
       As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.
      Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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C.Time waits for no man.
D.Honesty leads to success.

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