Question

20．上周是你校的藝術(shù)周，周三你們有幸邀請到外籍教師Henry教授給高一（1）班的學生上了一堂英語課．假如你是校報的記者李明，請你以"An Impressive English Lesson"為題按下列提示用英語寫一篇新聞報道．內(nèi)容包括：
1．Henry教授上課的情況；
2．學生們的表現(xiàn)和評價；
3．對英語學習的啟示．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．報道的標題、開頭和記者姓名已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫．
An Impressive English Lesson
On Wednesday of last Art Week，we                           ．
By Liming．

Answer 1

分析 本書面表達是一篇提綱作文．提綱作文寫作的時候注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣．
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語leave a deep impression on給…留下印象；took an active part in積極參加；His class was organized in such a relaxing and interesting way that it left a deep impression on the students．這個句子運用到such …that 如此以致于這個句型；Not only does this lesson arouse our interest in learning English，but it also strengthens our confidence in learning it well．這個句子運用not only..but also 句子，第一個句子用部分倒裝；

解答 An Impressive English Lesson
      On Wednesday of last Art Week，we felt greatly honored to invite Prof．Henry to give a lesson to the students of Class One，Grade One．His class was organized in such a relaxing and interesting way that it left a deep impression on the students．（高分句型一）
      Prof．Henry had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English．Meanwhile，he would repeat in time what students didn't understand．Greatly inspired，many students took an active part in his class．The students interviewed by us thought highly of his class．
      Not only does this lesson arouse our interest in learning English，but it also strengthens our confidence in learning it well．（高分句型二）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             By Liming．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．