Question

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to tell you that I’m interesting in the summer camp in Australia and I hope I can be become a member.
My name is Li Nan, a 18-year-old girl from Shaanxi, China, but I’m a Senior One student. As a student, I has learned English for 8 year. And I can communicate with foreigners in English free. As you know, I am a senior student now, so I know China well. I can introduced Chinese culture to foreign friends.
I hope I can accepted. I’m looking forward to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours 
Li Nan

Answer 1

小題1:interesting →interested
小題2:去掉be 或become
小題3:a →an
小題4:but →and
小題5:has →have
小題6:year →years
小題7:free →freely
小題8:introduced →introduce
小題9:accepted →be accepted
小題10:receive →receiving

試題分析：本文是一封書(shū)信，敘述了作者想要參加一個(gè)去澳大利亞的夏令營(yíng)的事情。信中介紹了自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)—英語(yǔ)不錯(cuò)，可以向外國(guó)朋友介紹中國(guó)文化，希望盡快收到答復(fù)。
小題1:be interested in 對(duì)……感興趣，主語(yǔ)通常指人，句中是說(shuō)作者對(duì)……感興趣。
小題2:be和become重復(fù)，所以要去掉一個(gè)。
小題3:在元音音素前要用不定冠詞an。
小題4:在本句中前后是并列關(guān)系要用and。
小題5:has只用在第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)后面，句中主語(yǔ)是I，故has →have。
小題6:year前是大于一的數(shù)字，year要用復(fù)數(shù)，year →years。
小題7:英語(yǔ)中要用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，因此本句中free →freely。
小題8:句中can是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞“能”，后接動(dòng)詞原形，故introduced →introduce。
小題9:由上下文可知，作者希望被接受，要用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can后接動(dòng)詞原形，因此用助動(dòng)詞be。
小題10:look forward to后接V-ing形式，因此receive →receiving。