Question

假設(shè)你是李平，開(kāi)學(xué)初，老師和家長(zhǎng)都要求你住校，而你卻喜歡走讀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給某英文報(bào)紙編輯寫(xiě)封信，請(qǐng)求給予指導(dǎo)。

老師和家長(zhǎng)的理由:                  李平的理由:

1. 方便問(wèn)問(wèn)題                        1. 晚上有更多的自習(xí)時(shí)間

2. 晚自習(xí)時(shí)間更能保證                2. 學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容可以自由支配

3. 培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立生活的能力                3. 可以看電視調(diào)節(jié)一下生活

注意；1.信的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.詞數(shù)；100左右；

3.參考詞匯；住校 board at school

Dear Editor,,

I’m a student of Senior Two.______________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a student of Senior Two. At the beginning of this term, my parents and teachers asked me to board at school. They say I can ask questions whenever I haveany.Besides,they think boarding at school will make it possible for me to make full use of my night time, and I can also develop the ability to look after myself.

However, I have my own thougts.Stayng at home in the evening ,I can make use of my time freely and learn what I’d like to .At the same time, I can watch TV for a little time. After all, study doesn’t mean everything. I really don’t know how to do it. Please give me your advice!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。