Question

The crowd at the airport moved forward like waves. The passengers had been waiting for a couple of hours for an airline employee to open the door leading to the plane outside. No one was in a good mood. An old man got trapped in the middle of the rush. Suddenly, he fell down, his head hitting the concrete floor, with blood gushing from his forehead. He appeared to be unconscious. Everyone rushed past him, except for Dana. She called for help.
A minute later, a young airline employee showed up. Hardly looking at the old man, she told Dana to get aboard her plane. She said the old man would be okay, and walked away.
Dana screamed for help. An airport supervisor appeared. He told Dana to get on the plane. Dana said that she was not moving until an ambulance arrived. The supervisor said her plane would leave without her. Dana said that she didn’t care.
An ambulance and two doctors finally arrived. The paramedics said that the man would be okay, but he would need stitches（縫線）. They put him into the ambulance and drove off.
On her way out to the plane, which was still refueling, Dana saw the employee who had ignored the old man. The employee said, “You’re lucky the plane didn’t leave without you.”
“The plane?” Dana asked. “Who cares about the plane? How could you be so cold? That was an old man; he could have been your grandfather! How would you like it if everyone just stepped over your grandfather and went on their way?”
【寫作內容】
1、以約30詞概括上文的主要內容；
2、以約120詞談談你閱讀了該故事后的感受，內容包括：
(1) 當時在場的人是怎樣的一種心理？
(2) 如果你當時也在場，你將如何處理？
(3) 你對整個事件作如何評價？
【寫作要求】
1、在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

Answer 1

Ready to get aboard, an old man suddenly got fainted, head bleeding. The rest of the passengers, including the airline employee walked past except Dana, who accompanied him until an ambulance came to his rescue.
Psychologically, the passengers must have been feeling sorry. However, already a couple of hours wasted, they couldn’t wait to board the plane. That way, it could take off sooner and reach their destinations earlier. Similarly, the employee didn’t want to cause more delays and complaints.
If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital. For me, life can’t be more precious. How could I walk my way ignoring a bleeding being?
Certainly, we can’t blame passengers for their “coldness”. It was understandable when they rushed their way once time was due. However, the staff of the airport should bear the responsibility to ensure every passenger’s safety. It was nobody but they that was offering service.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】范文對文章進行簡明扼要的歸納，自己的觀點明確，有理有據(jù)，其中不乏好的短語和句子：couldn’t wait to do迫不及待的做…， a couple of幾個， blame sb. for sth“因為…責備某人”，bear the responsibility “承擔責任”，Ready to get aboard, an old man suddenly got fainted, head bleeding. 這句話用了形容詞做狀語和獨立主格結構，The rest of the passengers, including the airline employee walked past except Dana, who accompanied him until an ambulance came to his rescue.這句話用了定語從句， If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital. 這句話用了虛擬語氣和現(xiàn)在分詞， It was nobody but they that was offering service.這句話用了強調句。