Question

17．請你寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容如下：
1．倡議同學(xué)為災(zāi)區(qū)兒童捐贈二手書；
2．說明此舉的可取之處．

注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右，題目已為你寫好；
   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
A Proposal
My fellow students，
These days，it is frequently reported that students in the disaster-hit areas are desperately lacking educational resources．
…
So，my dear friends，I sincerely hope that you will support my proposal and join us．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一封倡議書，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：倡議同學(xué)為災(zāi)區(qū)兒童捐贈二手書；說明此舉的可取之處．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：call for號召，呼吁；What's more，而且；are of great use 非常有用；in the process of在…的過程中；
In a word總之，take part in參加；
By donating the books you have used，you can help the new senior 3 students save money．（高分句型一）
They can get a better understanding of their subjects in the process of referring to these notes．（高分句型二）
 Those who are interested in taking part in this voluntary activity can deliver their books to the office of the student Union On June 12th 2017．（高分句型三）

解答 A Proposal
My fellow students，
        These days，it is frequently reported that students in the disaster-hit areas are desperately lacking educational resources．A voluntary donating activity is called for here．Your second-hand books are wanted．By donating the books you have used，you can help the new senior 3 students save money．（高分句型一） What's more，the valuable notes in your books are of great use to the new senior 3 students．They can get a better understanding of their subjects in the process of referring to these notes．（高分句型二） Also，donating books can fill us with happiness．In a word，this voluntary activity can benefit both givers and receivers．Those who are interested in taking part in this voluntary activity can deliver their books to the office of the student Union On June 12th 2017．（高分句型三） Thank you!
     So，my dear friends，I sincerely hope that you will support my proposal and join us．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Students'Union
                                                                                                                                                                                                            May 5th，2017

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．