Question

最近，越來越多的學(xué)生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍。請根據(jù)下面提示，一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文，說說兩者各自的好處與壞處，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)100左右。

1. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間；  2. 安全；  3. 自由性；  4. 與同學(xué)交往；  5. 學(xué)習(xí)效果。

注意：可從其他角度闡述，但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條。

要求：字跡工整，段落清晰。

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of cause it is safer.

A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone , it’s better for studyas you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.

As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.

Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇觀點(diǎn)論述性書面表達(dá)。第1段導(dǎo)入：提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個(gè)決定作為議論的話題。第2段對這一話題進(jìn)行正反分述，本段一般也采用總分總或總分的寫作特點(diǎn)，讓評卷老師一目了然。當(dāng)然在表述時(shí)要注意句式變換，主被動(dòng)兼用，切勿單純翻譯，結(jié)構(gòu)單一。第3段結(jié)論：：照應(yīng)第1段，亮明觀點(diǎn)，構(gòu)成"總—分—總"結(jié)構(gòu)。

考點(diǎn)：本文是一篇觀點(diǎn)論述性書面表達(dá)。

點(diǎn)評：觀點(diǎn)對比類作文一般分為三段式，總+分+總的格式，在組織語言上基本步驟如下：

①  給觀點(diǎn)分組討論類

開頭模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****                

論述觀點(diǎn) when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that ****  ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they  consider that ***

結(jié)尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****

②一些精彩亮點(diǎn)連接詞  in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore

moreover（另外）

last but not least important ,most important （最重要的是）

worst of all （最糟糕的是）,

to make matters wores（更糟的是）

as far as i concerned, personally（我個(gè)人看來）

however ,nevertheless（然而）