Question

一年一度的校園文化節(jié)又拉開了序幕，但今年學生卻沒有表現(xiàn)出像往年的興趣和熱情面對這一現(xiàn)象，有人提出校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的問題，這引起了同學們的討論。上周末你班也進行了一場討論。大多數(shù)同學都支持校園文化節(jié)，請你根據(jù)下面所提供的內(nèi)容將討論結果做一總結，字數(shù)100左右。
支持的原因：1. 給學生創(chuàng)造了展示自我才華的舞臺；
2. 有利于提高學習興趣；
3.豐富校園文化，活躍校園氣氛。
注意：1. 行文連貫，內(nèi)容完整；
2. 題目和開頭語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3. 總詞數(shù)100左右。
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The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again, but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.__________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version：
To be continued
The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again , but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before .Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active.
In addition , more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions .On the other hand , students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

解析試題分析：此篇書面表達要求對校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的討論結果做出總結。在寫作時同學們要注意先要說明討論的事件，然后再講述討論結果。在講述事件時可以用一般過去時態(tài)，而在發(fā)表個人見解時須采用一般現(xiàn)在時或者根據(jù)需要使用一般將來時態(tài)。此外在寫作時注意不要遺漏要點，而且還要恰當選用連接詞以使行文連貫，結構緊湊。
【亮點說明】文章要點全面，語言豐富。短文中高級詞匯motivated，qualified，promote以及長句的使用顯示了作者較高的語言運用能力，而且短語Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, In addition，On the other hand 等的恰當使用不僅使文章上下銜接緊湊，語句連貫，而且也避免了文章句式的單一，總之這是一篇不錯的范文。
考點：考查提綱作文。