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3．2022年北京、張家口冬奧會(huì)正面向全球招募中學(xué)生志愿者．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，希望能為2022冬奧會(huì)提供志愿者服務(wù)．請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語給該組織負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封申請信．內(nèi)容包括：1．自我介紹；2．申請的理由：喜歡體育、擅長英語、鍛煉機(jī)會(huì)；3．希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．書信開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
        ．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：I have a good command of English，which allows me to communicate with foreigners without difficulty．我的英語很好，能讓我毫不費(fèi)力地和外國人交流．
這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，which指代主句的內(nèi)容．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance．如果你能給我一次機(jī)會(huì)，我將不勝感激．本句中if引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語從句．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
    I'm Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle School．I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games to be held in Beijing and Zhangjiakou．
   I want to become a volunteer for the following reasons．First，I love sports and playing sports has been an important part of my life．Second，I have a good command of English，which allows me to communicate with foreigners without difficulty．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）More importantly，I will be able to improve my communication skills and learn new cultures by serving the athletes and guests from other parts of the world，
  I think I am qualified to be a volunteer．I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance．
                                                                  Yours
                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．