Question

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\）,并在該句下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Li Hua won the first place in our city in this year College Entrance Exam. And she has admitted by Peking University. As a good friend of hers, I’d like to talk about her study in the senior school. First of all, she was very confident and studies very hard. She was determined to go to Peking University but she was sure she could manage. What’s more, she had a carefully plan about what to do every day. She had formed a good habit of studying. For an example, she never put off all what she should do today till tomorrow and seldom did she stay up later at night. She also pleased to help others, as a result of that, all the teachers and students liked her.

Answer 1

【小題1】year →year’s
【小題2】has∨admitted→been
【小題3】studies→studied
【小題4】but→and
【小題5】carefully→careful
【小題6】For an example→去掉an
【小題7】all去掉或what→that
【小題8】later→late
【小題9】She∨also→was
【小題10】that→which

解析試題分析：文中敘述了作者的好朋友李華考上了北大，作者回顧總結(jié)她平時(shí)是如何學(xué)習(xí)的。
【小題1】因?yàn)闀r(shí)間有所有格的形式應(yīng)該用year’s.
【小題2】she 與admit之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。她被大學(xué)錄取。
【小題3】在高中學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)，當(dāng)然用過(guò)去式studied.
【小題4】but表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，and表遞進(jìn)或并列，根據(jù)上下文的關(guān)系故用and.
【小題5】carefully修飾副詞或動(dòng)詞，careful用來(lái)修名詞。故用careful修飾plan.
【小題6】For example是固定短語(yǔ)。
【小題7】把a(bǔ)ll去掉后面就是what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句； what改為that，all就是先行詞，that引導(dǎo)的是定語(yǔ)從句。
【小題8】later后來(lái)；late晚的；stay up late熬夜。根據(jù)句意故用late.
【小題9】be pleased to do sth很高興做某事，這里缺少was.
【小題10】這里是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，也不能放在介詞之后，而which可以，故用which.
考點(diǎn)：這是一篇記敘文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：文中考查了多個(gè)固定短語(yǔ)，形容詞、副詞、代詞及動(dòng)詞等的用法，需要考生有扎實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。