假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、 只允許修改10處 ，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.

My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.

1.a----an

2.Disappointing___Diszppointed

3.patiently___patient

4.decided后加 to

5.get___got

6.student____students

7.把which 去掉

8.him__me

9.tell___t ells

10.for___of

【解析】

試題分析：

1. ordinary的首字母發(fā)音是元音，故用不定冠詞an。

2.

3.

4. to do sth是固定句型，意思是決定做某事。

5.

6. of + 可數(shù)名詞的復數(shù)形式。

7. 去掉。

8.

9.

10. use of是固定用法，意思是利用。

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