Question

16．假如你是李華，你打算參加2012年6月份舉行的濟(jì)南市中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，你的演講主題是環(huán)境問題．請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇演講稿：
1．介紹一種你所關(guān)注的環(huán)境問題；
2．發(fā)表你對解決該問題的見解．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫．
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就環(huán)境問題寫一篇演講稿，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：介紹一種你所關(guān)注的環(huán)境問題；發(fā)表你對解決該問題的見解．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為介紹一種你所關(guān)注的環(huán)境問題．第二部分為發(fā)表你對解決該問題的見解．
重點短語與句型：
large quantities of 大量地
lead to  導(dǎo)致
as a result結(jié)果
 take action to  do sth．采取行動做某事
高分句型一：What we are suffering is only a small part of what the nature once suffered．此句為what引導(dǎo)的主語從句和賓語從句
高分句型二：Measures should be taken to protect the environment on which we are relying．此句為定語從句，介詞加關(guān)系代詞
高分句型三：Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it．
                   Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves．此句Only+介詞短語，主句部分倒裝

解答 Right now I am talking about fighting for respect to our environment．Though the environment doesn't have a mouth to deprecate what humans have done to her，she retaliates through action．In the early years the Chinese cut down large quantities of trees，at the source of the yellow river，which led to the disappearance of big forests and terrible floods．As a result，the Huangtu plateau which was once covered with grass and forests was turned into barrens that supported fewer plants．（介紹一種你所關(guān)注的環(huán)境問題；）
What we are suffering is only a small part of what the nature once suffered（高分句型一）．If we don't take action to show respect to the environment，we will have to face an increasingly awful situation．Measures should be taken to protect the environment on which we are relying（高分句型二）．First，governments should forbid destroying vegetation，rivers and lakes，oceans  and the atmosphere as well．Second，voices should be made to announce the public of the importance of protecting the environment．Third，enterprises should pay special attention to the effect they have on the environment and work out solutions for the problems．（發(fā)表你對解決該問題的見解．）
Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it．Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves（高分句型三）．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．