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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

How is everything going with you? As for me, I have a great news to share—I will finally get to be in a book!

Last Saturday morning, Dad and I were eating breakfast while we heard a knock on the door. I rushed to open the door. It was our neighbor Miss Lydia, that draws pictures for children’s books. Miss Lydia greeted me with a smile, looking happily to see me. Remembering my best manner, I said, “Hello, Miss Lydia. Won’t you come in?” Miss Lydia came in, sitting at the breakfast table, and said to my dad that he would like both of us to be her models in one of her books! I jumped off my chair and run to give Miss Lydia a big hug.

I hope my first model experience will be both enjoyable or unforgettable. I’m looking forward to hearing you soon.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】第二句a 去掉

【2】while—when

【3】that—who

【4】happily—happy

【5】manner—manners

【6】sitting—sat

【7】he---she

【8】run—ran

【9】or—and

【10】you 前加from

【解析】

試題分析：作者第一次為鄰居Miss Lydia當(dāng)模特的經(jīng)歷。

【1】第二句a 去掉 news是不可數(shù)名詞，故第二句a 去掉。

【2】while—when 固定句式：was/were doing sth. when 主語+一般過去時態(tài)--，正在做某事---，這時候---，故把while—when。

【3】that—who Miss Lydia是先行詞，后面用who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，故把that—who。

【4】happily—happy look看起來（連系動詞），后面用形容詞作表語，故把happily—happy。

【5】manner—manners句意：記得我最好的禮貌。故把manner—manners。

【6】sitting—sat 此處是并列謂語，故把sitting—sat。

【7】he---she 根據(jù)前面的Miss Lydia，可知把he---she。

【8】run—ran 此處是并列謂語，故把run—ran。

【9】or—and 固定詞組：both---and---，兩個都---。故把or—and 。

【10】you 前加from 固定詞組：hear from收到某人的來信，故在you 前加from。

【知識拓展】

when后的從句謂語動詞既可是延續(xù)性動詞,也可是短暫性動詞,而且還可作并列連詞,譯為“這時”.但以下句型一定用when,作并列連詞：

句型A：be about to do…when…正要做…這時(發(fā)生另一事)

句型B：was/were doing…when…正在…這時(發(fā)生另一事)

句型C：had done…when…剛要做…這時(發(fā)生另一事)

1.We were about to set out when it began to rain.我們剛要出發(fā)天突然下雨了.

2.He had hardly sat down when his mobile rang.他剛一坐下手機就響了.

3.I was walking along the bank of the river when I fell into it.我正沿河岸散步突然掉進水里.