Question

學(xué)校即將舉行以"Music and My Life"為主題的英語作文比賽,請按下列要求寫一篇詞數(shù)100-120左右的作文。內(nèi)容需包括:
◆我喜歡的音樂類型
◆最喜歡在什么時候聽音樂
◆音樂帶給了我什么
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Answer 1

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I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. While most of people nowadays like modern music such as rock and pop music, I like listening to classical music. For many people, they find classical music boring to listen. However, I think classical music is serious and can make people inspired. Unlike modern music, most of the classical music can last long. Every time I feel tired or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Music plays an important part in my life. Music makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. More importantly, it makes me refreshed. If there were no music in the world, it would really be a boring and dull place!

試題分析：寫作時認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁。應(yīng)注意以下幾個方面。(1)時態(tài)錯誤：文章中忽視了動作發(fā)生的時間。(2)人稱代詞錯誤：單復(fù)數(shù)、形容詞性物主代詞與名詞性物主代詞錯誤。(3)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、動詞單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂語不一致。(4)用詞錯誤：對同義詞的區(qū)別、使用場合、習(xí)慣用法不熟悉，或者忘記了單詞。(5)內(nèi)容不連貫：不會用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，語序混亂。沒有統(tǒng)籌安排，寫到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號錯誤，缺少冠詞。(7)書寫混亂，卷面潦草。
考點(diǎn)：
點(diǎn)評：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。