Question

20．假設(shè)你是王林，寒假期間你要到倫敦旅游，請你根據(jù)以下提示給你的英國好友Alex寫一封信，請他推薦一個旅館，要點如下：
1 介紹你倫敦之行的目的；
2 停留時間：5個晚上，從2月8日到12日；
3 房間要求：預(yù)定一個房間，旅館要靠近公共汽車站；有獨立浴室；可以上網(wǎng)；
注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Alex，
How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely；
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏．在表達要點時，要注意條理清楚，層次分明．在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時在列舉要求的時候要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔．
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些高級詞匯：recommend sth to sb給某人推薦…，keep in touch with聯(lián)系，gain access to the internet上網(wǎng)．運用了固定句型：I would appreciate it if…如果…我將感激不盡；I am looking forward to your early reply．期待您早日回復(fù)．范文中的句式多變，運用了不同的語法知識：To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons運用了動詞不定式作目的狀語；so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句；I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station這句話在賓語從句里又套用了定語從句．范文中還用了連接副詞in addition"另外；并且"，使文章更加通順．
I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）
In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Alex，
      How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
      To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
      I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Wang Lin

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．