Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote about 480 books，among those his best known work was his science fiction stories. He was born in Russia in January 2，1920.When he was three year old，he moved to New York City with his parents. In 1941，he gained his Master's degree in chemistry. From 1942 to 1945，he works as a junior chemist at the Philadelphia Navy Yard. It was Asimov's extraordinary imagination and amazing mind made him a great writer. Throughout his life，Asimov received much awards, both for his science fiction books and his science books，and unfortunately on April 6，1992，Asimov dead as a result of an HIV infection that he had got from a blood transfusion nine years early.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】取掉第一行writer前面的a.

【2】those → which

【3】in → on

【4】year → years

【5】works → worked

【6】mind后面加that

【7】much → many

【8】books，后面的and → but

【9】dead →died

【10】early → earlier

【解析】

試題分析：通過閱讀并修改此短文，考查學生對固定搭配，動詞時態(tài)和語態(tài)，名詞的單復數(shù)問題，以及復合賓語的辨別和運用。

【1】取掉第一行writer前面的a。 考查冠詞。Isaac Asimov是科學家兼作家， 一個人身兼二職時，第二名詞前的冠詞不用。

【2】those → which 考查定語從句的關(guān)系詞。 which代替前面的480種書，做介詞among的賓語。

【3】in → on 考查介詞。1920年1月2日是具體某一天前面用介詞on。

【4】year → years 考查名詞復數(shù)。 三歲，year一個用復數(shù)形式y(tǒng)ears。

【5】works → worked 考查時態(tài)的一致性。全文都是過去式，這里應該保持一致。

【6】mind后面加that 考查強調(diào)句式。 句意：是阿西莫夫超凡的想象力和令人驚嘆的精神使他成為一個偉大的作家。

【7】much → many 考查形容詞。awards是復數(shù)名詞，所以應該用many修飾。

【8】books，后面的and → but 考查連詞。前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。雖然他的科幻小說和科普書都很暢銷，但是不幸的是，他于1992年4月6日因感染了艾滋病而去世。

【9】dead →died考查動詞。這里用died作謂語。dead是形容詞表狀態(tài)不能獨立做謂語，這里表動作用動詞died。

【10】early → earlier 考查固定用法。“九年前”英語是：nine years earlier。