假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Brad,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the houses expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love,  and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.
Li Hua


【小題1】ask—asked
【小題2】the—a
【小題3】Comparing---Compared
【小題4】hard---harder
【小題5】expensively—expensive
【小題6】去掉marry后的with
【小題7】Therefore—However
【小題8】house---houses
【小題9】we---us
【小題10】offer后加to

解析試題分析：做為80后的一員，作者在文中介紹了80后一代的處境，作者認(rèn)為和父母相比，80后的生活更加不易，不僅工作難找， 房子買不起，而且很多女孩都希望嫁給有車有房的人，但是作者認(rèn)為盡管處境艱難，人們還是要努力去創(chuàng)造自己美好的未來。
【小題1】考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。In your last letter you askabout the post-80s 。從your last letter判斷此句應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)，所以把a(bǔ)sk改為asked。
【小題2】考查冠詞用法。Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. 根據(jù)語境可知此處是泛指概念，句意：實(shí)際上，我就是屬于這個(gè)群體的一個(gè)男孩，所以把the 改為a。
【小題3】考查非謂語動詞。Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. 從結(jié)構(gòu)可知句子主語life和compare之間是動賓關(guān)系，所以把Comparing改為Compared。
【小題4】考查形容詞用法。life for us is getting much hard. 從上下文可知作者是用自己的生活與過去父母們的生活相比，應(yīng)該用比較級，所以把hard改為harder
【小題5】考查形容詞用法。The job market is tough and the houses expensively to afford。從結(jié)構(gòu)可知houses后省略了be動詞，所以應(yīng)該用形容詞，把expensively改為expensive。完整句子應(yīng)該是the houses are expensive to afford。
【小題6】考查動詞用法。many girls prefer to marry with a man ，marry是及物動詞，與某人結(jié)婚“marry sb”所以去掉marry后的with。
【小題7】考查副詞用法。Therefore, I don’t think love built on house ，從上下文可知此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以把Therefore改為However。
【小題8】考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。I don’t think love built on house ，house是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)句意判斷此處應(yīng)該用house的復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以把house改為houses。
【小題9】考查代詞用法。a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts ，介詞of后跟賓語，所以應(yīng)該用人稱代詞賓格，把we改為us。
【小題10】考查動詞不定式… are making great efforts live a good life，從語境可知live a good life 是make great efforts 的目的，所以在offer后加to。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯。

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