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非選擇題部分(共40分)

第三部分：寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)

第一節(jié)：短文改錯(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分l0分)

  下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第ll處起)不計分。

例如：      It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily                                                     the I was completely free then, so I'll t0 say "yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p. m.  am in Friday evening. on

     After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch". I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug  (擁抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. Mter we left, I said, "That was

very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma. " "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.

Answer 1

   After shopping, Mother andI went to a restaurant for lunch. I  notice   Mother looking at a

noticed

nearby table occupy   by an elderly woman and ∧ young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly         occupied                         a                                        clear

that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped  on  their table. "Excuse me," she said,

                                                by/at

 put    her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother.

Putting                                                   much

 May I hug (擁抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she aocepted to  it. After we left, I

                                                        ＼

said, "That was very nice of you, Mother.  So  I didn't think she looked like Grandma. "

                                   But

"Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.

I

解析:

1. 第2句：notice→noticed。根據(jù)第一句時態(tài)可判斷全文講述的是過去的事情，故此處用一般過去時態(tài)。

2. 第2句：occupy→occupied。此處“occupy by an elderly woman…”是分詞短語作后置定語，又根據(jù)table和occupy可知表被動關(guān)系，故用過去分詞，即用occupied。

3. 第2句：在and和young之間加a。此處表示一對年輕夫婦，故需加不定冠詞a。

4. 第3句：clearly→clear。It was clear that…“……是明確的”，在be動詞后需用形容詞而非副詞。

5. 第4句：on→at/by。句意：當我們離開時，母親在他們的桌前停下來了。由句意可知此處不是表示“在桌子上”，而是“在桌旁，桌前”的意思，故用介詞at/by。

6. 第4句：put→putting。此處是分詞短語作伴隨狀語，she和put之間是主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。

7. 第5句：many→much。句意：你使我想起來很多關(guān)于我的母親。此處表示泛指很多，故用so much修飾。

8. 第6句：劃掉to。accept“接受”，是及物動詞，后直接加賓語。

9. 第7句：So→ But。句意：媽媽，你真是太好了。但是我并不認為她像祖母。由句意可知此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but。

10. 第8句：me→I。此處表示“我也這樣認為”，表示情況和上句一樣，且表示的是否定含義時，用“neither+助動詞+主語”結(jié)構(gòu)。