Question

  假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

      My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

Answer 1

此篇文章是記敘文，敘述了作者和爺爺在一個(gè)星期天得早晨去釣魚的情形，反映了爺孫倆在釣魚過程中體味到的樂趣。

L 1 無錯(cuò)。

L2. One Sunday morning, we go fishing.   go改為went.(考查時(shí)態(tài)。本篇文章敘述的是“一個(gè)星期天早晨”的事，應(yīng)用過去時(shí))

L2. We took ours fishing poles…       ours改為our(考查物主代詞。本句物主代詞后面有fishing poles,是名詞，所以應(yīng)該用形容詞性物主代詞，而不是名詞性物主代詞)

L3. As soon as we arrived, so we ……    so 去掉（考查連詞。英語中兩簡單句間只用一個(gè)連接詞構(gòu)成復(fù)合句，本句句首已經(jīng)有了連詞as soon as,所以后面就不用連接詞了）

L3. Before waiting for……                         before 改為after（考查介詞，在此時(shí)間順序`出現(xiàn)混亂，不符合發(fā)展的邏輯）

L4. I was began to get impatiently.    impatiently改為impatient.(考查形容詞和副詞的用法。get這里是聯(lián)系動詞，后面用形容詞。)

L4. I want to give up, and my…           and 改為but. (考查連詞。兩個(gè)句子間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而不是順接關(guān)系。)

L5. Finally, there were a sudden pull…… were 改為was. (考查主謂一致。There be 句型的主語是緊接著的名詞，這里的主語是a pull,單數(shù)形式，不能用were。)

L6. and fish was caught.                             and 和fish之間添加冠詞a。（考查冠詞。本句中的fish 在這里指的是一條魚，可數(shù)名詞，要加a;作“魚肉”時(shí)不可數(shù)。）

L6. Within the next few minute,my……     minutes 改為minutes.(考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。the next few minutes,接下來的幾分鐘，很明顯是用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。)

L7.Felt hungry, we built a fire…                 Felt應(yīng)改為Feeling.(考查非謂語動詞。此處，非謂語動詞作狀語，和主語we之間為主謂關(guān)系，所以，應(yīng)該用Ving形式，而不是Vedi形式。)